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My Manga by ~butterflyalmondgirl:iconbutterflyalmondgirl:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Narrative > Open




I was dreaming of a storm.I
t was so powerful and I was so cold.
It was so real It felt the rain.
It did not last, I awoke to find myself on the floor on top of the
hot pink blanket that I was using.
The blanket was perfectly folded
on the floor. I still felt wet but wasn't.
I didn't feel right, even though it was
normal for me to sleep on top of a blanket on the floor and turn my fan on high.
I looked up and down, then leaned up,I turned,just a little
and there he was sitting there,
                        watching me sleep, cold and alone,in a storm.
©2005-2009 ~butterflyalmondgirl
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I don't know how to submit poetry so I am hoping that this works....

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~cavy Mar 21, 2005, 7:38:39 PM
Not saying you copied...but...do you happen to have a How to draw more Manga book??? I have it and your characters look similar to some in the book...

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Things are shaping up to be Pretty Odd.
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~butterflyalmondgirl Mar 22, 2005, 7:43:53 PM
I said in the description that I suck at tracing. So Yes it was a trace but it was only for my poem.
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~cavy Mar 23, 2005, 3:22:21 PM
Why did you trace it when you could have just used the book to draw it ?

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Things are shaping up to be Pretty Odd.
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~butterflyalmondgirl Mar 23, 2005, 4:38:55 PM
Because I can't draw!! I just am not good at stuff like that!!
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~cavy Mar 23, 2005, 6:08:34 PM
Oh well...Keep at it...never give up never surrender!

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Things are shaping up to be Pretty Odd.
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